I made this ad for the Audi A6 2.7t. I know it's not Lexus but I need some opinions on what I can do to improve it... or if you think it's good how it is, then that's fine too.

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Mine:

 

Any comments?

 

E, looks good.I like the font work especially.What might be cool though is to have half of the car normal and then half of it with the filter applied but feather the transition though.Or maybe just try to apply the filter to the background and leave the car as is since its a car ad and the car is the main focus.Just some food for thought, looks good though.

 

Good Idea, I left the car blue though instead of the green

 

E, looks real good